Monday, April 13, 2015

Hostage (Blog 2)

So far in the book its good because things are starting to get out of hand. Because this one boy named Rob and his friend Pedro but Rob calls him Peeps. So they was going to the bank because Rob wanted to put money in so he can save up. But as they was in the bank two guys had came in with stockings on there head robing the bank. First they walk up to Kate who works at the bank and they told her to give them the money and she pulled out a fist full of money them the guy went to Mrs. Dutton and told her the same thing and Mrs. Dutton did the same as Kate. The man didn't like what he had saw he got mad and said were's is the rest of the money the man said.

The first chapters was good I'd liked it I think the book could get better.

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