Who:Rob, Pedro, Kate, Mrs. Duttuon, Bank Manager, Some lady that was there, A1, Tall older man, Officer Doyle
What: Two bank robber's are trying to rob the bank but there plan's got messed up the getaway driver left when he herd the cops coming all of the rest of the money was in the safe and six hostage's.
When:This can also happen at any time can't tell the time when something is going to happen.
Where:This can happen any where. (It really didn't said where in the book)
Why:I really don't know why they are trying to rob the bank.
How do I feel:What I feel about this book is that it is cool it keeps you wondering about whats going to happen next in the book and it just make you want to just keep reading.
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Monday, April 13, 2015
Hostage (Blog 2)
So far in the book its good because things are starting to get out of hand. Because this one boy named Rob and his friend Pedro but Rob calls him Peeps. So they was going to the bank because Rob wanted to put money in so he can save up. But as they was in the bank two guys had came in with stockings on there head robing the bank. First they walk up to Kate who works at the bank and they told her to give them the money and she pulled out a fist full of money them the guy went to Mrs. Dutton and told her the same thing and Mrs. Dutton did the same as Kate. The man didn't like what he had saw he got mad and said were's is the rest of the money the man said.
The first chapters was good I'd liked it I think the book could get better.
The first chapters was good I'd liked it I think the book could get better.
Thursday, March 26, 2015
Tolerance
The ability or willingness to allow the existence, occurrence, or practice of something, in particular the
existence of opinions or behavior that one does not necessarily agree with.
I think a good way for me to be more tolerance is to not listen to them let them say what ever they got to say because who ever I choice to be my friend could be anyone it don't matter how they look, act, talk, or anything it really don't matter to me and for those people who do judge people you have no right to judge them before you judge them first look at yourself.
existence of opinions or behavior that one does not necessarily agree with.
I think a good way for me to be more tolerance is to not listen to them let them say what ever they got to say because who ever I choice to be my friend could be anyone it don't matter how they look, act, talk, or anything it really don't matter to me and for those people who do judge people you have no right to judge them before you judge them first look at yourself.
Sunday, March 22, 2015
Blog 1 (Hit and run chapter 1)
The first chapter of my book was about a fifteen-year-old Mike McGill has been living with his Uncle Billy since his mother''s death only ten years older. Than Mike, Billy loves to party, and doest pay much attention when Mike starts getting in trouble but Mike's history teacher, an ex-cop named Riel. Does pay attention especially when long hidden information starts coming to light that makes it seem that the death of Mike''s. Mother might not have been an accident at all another gritty mystery from four.
Tuesday, January 13, 2015
David & the Mighty eight
Chapter 2
The part of this chapter was about David and his older sister Mary had to move somewhere else because of the bombing and was starting to get dangerous for them to be there now as they started to get on the train to go to another family while the world war 2 was going on and David said to his mom come with us you'll be safe with us but David mom said no I cant because I got to stay here so I can help your father at the war so David and Mary said there good byes and left to move on with there new life.
Davis & the Mighty eight
Chapter 1
The first chapter of my book was about this boy named David and his family living while the world war 2 was going on and David dad war in the war he was flying one of the planes in the war and the rest of the family had to be safe and go to the bombing shelter when they start bombing.
Thursday, January 8, 2015
My Day
This morning was ok for I got up and did what I did what I had to do. And then I went in my room to watch T.V and stuff but thats not it. I did other things like went on the laptop to do some homework. After that I help my dad to take his stuff down stares for his meeting then my day was about to end off good. So I thing it is but still you got to make the best of things live life while you can so do the best you can peace.
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